The Rogue Chapter 1

Сообщение от Eveko

5 years after the corruption of the sunwell
a yong boy walked the roads of Silvermoon
His father came and Said
: <Magister Kel'Danis said you dont practise
enough Arcane and skip school to se what
the paladins are doing.Our familie has a great name
for our mages ,you cant just go and try to be bleesed by
they light or what ever the paladins do.>
The boy answered
:<Hmph,i dont want to become a paladin
i just enjoy the sparing with weapons >
As the boy grew up he was stealing items and
became very good at it. One day he got caught.
He ran away.He thenk rushed into the sanctrum and left to
the undercity.He then run as far as he could.He fainted
out of exaustion.The he was found by Death Stalker Robert.

He woke up in a shabby hut.The death stalker apeared
out of thin air and said
<< Hello boy, i found you on the ground in the glades.
This place is not very welcome for the Living>>
The boy scared said :
<< Where am i? Who are you!Are you from the scourge!>>
The deathstalker replied:
<< No i am one of the forsaken,we were part of the scourge,
youre father did not say to you that were alied ?what are you doing
here alone?>>
They boy replied
:<< I stole the blade of one paladin , i was to give it back to him
But i let it accidently fall in the forge and half of it is melt>>
The death stalker intrested asked
:<< How did you get away,and what is youre name boy>>
The boy replied <<Eveko, i just ran and then stole some poweder
to hide myself and then i used the orb to come here>>
The Death Stalker paused....
Then he said
:<< Yo used flash powder...only rogues know how to use it...
well i think youre cut out for being a rogue.Give me that blade
you broke and i will reforge it to youre first dagger.I will train you
and you will become one of the best rogues>>

Сообщение от fudgeball

Good idea, but it's a wall of text, try spacing it up. you also have alot of spelling and grammar problems ( use commas).

lastly, why doo you use << instead of "? just wondering.

Сообщение от Patty

I found that unreadable, sorry. D:

Сообщение от Eveko

Yes i have a form of Dislexia.Cant help it. Even if i try to correct it.Ass for spelling my browser should mark them but i dont know why it doesnt do it now...

Сообщение от Morec0

As Morec would say "Wall of Text hits Tauman for 999999 Damage"

Lol, so true.

Fix it up a little bit and I'm sur it will be a better read.

EDIT: Sorry, didn't see that part about the Dislexia, sorry if my comment was a bit rough.

Сообщение от ArcaneMage2034

Now i will tell ya a story for 1 brave rogue.
So it begans...

Imagine a dark cave. NO, no lamps its dark as a dog's a*s...
In the shadows is standing a young elf with a blade and sword in both hands.
After the events from the last few weeks, and the scars on his body the rigue its just sick and tired...
To be burned, frozen, shoot, sliced etc and the end of the week they told him if he wanna be a NINJA - he better get use to it...
So the dude is standing in the dark and stalk in a magical plate-mail armor (absolute resistance), few pillows beneat it for a faster warming VS the frost mages and small water tank with a shower a top of the head for fire ones.
And than in the cave eneters a couple orcs with a torch in a hand talking about "What a morron is the troll Horg and when they gonna break his tusks and shut them in his...) The elf stands up and tight all the muscles in hid elf body , prepearing to atack. He waits the two green things to pass him, and he JUMPS...
The elf get up and atack the orcs.... But he hit abeam and fall down... AGAIN!
-Hmm a beam! - the rogue said.
-Hmm a Rogue in a plate - the orcs said.

To Be Continued!

Fun huh :D:D:D

Сообщение от Monday

What.

Сообщение от Queggy

Please create your own threads for your own stories, ArcaneMage instead of resurrecting old and useless threads.

The Rogue Chapter 1

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