The Depths ( page 1 chapter 1)

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Chapter 1 The Awakening

"My head,... it hurts. My body is numb, i feel weak.
Why am i underwater? , why am i not drowning?

Suddenly a siren appeared above the Elf and
started whispering

"You finally woke up. You have been asleep for
15 years"

The Elf barely able to speak say's
"What..ugh, 15 years.... i slept? Where am I?"
-the Elf moans out of pain- and continues "Who are you?"
The siren replied " Rest , you barely have any strength . My
name is of no use to you. You're the depths of the Maelstrom.
You are also the only non serpent naga "

After 2 weeks of rest the Elf stands up and walks. He looks around
he sees strange buildings that most of them look like temples.
He noticed the fish and was still confused to why he can
manage to breathe underwater . The city he was looking was
full of weird serpent like creatures.

He decides then to hit the roads. As he was swimming through the
building he saw a mirror . He looked at his reflection. He was not
the same . his fingers had finds attacked to them. His skin was scaly with a feint purple color and hes eyes were red. Suddenly the siren that he met the first day he woke up appears and says :

" I see you rested well , there some changes to youre body as you see
but are not as heavy as the most of us. Azhara asked me to bring you over."

He replied confused : " Queen Azhara? I thought we all died during the implosion of the well of Eternity, there is no way shes still alive" The siren then without a word Teleported him in a castle . There the Elf saw another Siren, she had colorful scales
and a staff with strange magic essence floating around it. Then she turned around and said " I am Queen Azhara Lord of the Naga" The Elf confused asked " Naga?, what happened to use during the implosion"

Azhara replied " We turned into these Things thanks to the help
of an Old god, you however stoped my plans of summoning sargeras, but
you survived with natural mutation,seems Malfurion helped you"
The Elf spaced out and then yelled " What have you done with my
memory! Whats is going on here! I want some explanations now!"

Azhara shortly after teleported and said to the Elf telepathically
" You have no right to Demand anything Thrash!" The elf found him self in a cage ,he could see the city from a distance.Still tired of his awakening he went to sleep

Edit : Added a chapter Name*

Сообщение от Morec0

Naga all the way! Needs a bit of work grammar wise in some parts, but it has potential.

Сообщение от Eveko

Thank you :P But as for grammar i dont know if i can fix any of it.
I live in a non-speaking english country. I never had any lessons. I purely learned english from video games and TV and stuff. Most of my vocabulary comes from books and stuff. I am thinking of taking a course this summur

Сообщение от Morec0

Oh yeah, sorry if I offended you. Hard to keep track of some of the Wowhead posters.

The Depths ( page 1 chapter 1)

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