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Behelich
That was an interesting read. Looking to forward to see where this leads to. Keep up the good work!
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Patty
It was pretty good on the whole, but there were a couple of typos, the most prevalent that I remember being a confusion between its/it's.
Just remember that:
it's = it is/has.
its = possessive pronoun, 'belonging to it'.
:)
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Monday
I enjoyed it thoroughly, however there were just enough typos to distract from the overall story )=
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