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Paradox: The Lure of Eternity {Prologue}
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Behelich
Half-way through the story I was asking myself - a gnome with pink hair and
no
pigtails?
And then I understood I could count on you. ;p
The descriptions were great, kind of makes you want to kick back, close your eyes and picture it.
Keep up the good work!
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Patty
Neon, I've always wanted to see a CoT style instance of the original War of the Ancients.
<3
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Orranis
Woot, was thinking we need some more Fan Fics's to juice up this forum, and a Neon one no less!
Wall of beautiful writing crits Orranis for 67,903.
Orranis has a loregasm.
War of the Ancients <3
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Aimsyr
Will this only be focused on the War of the Ancients? Or will the characters be sent into other times as well once they have dealt with matters there?
Not that I am complaining, I am anticipating epicness, but I quite like some of the other historic events in the Warcraft universe besides the War of the Ancients and knowing your writing it would make for an epic story either way.
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Aimsyr
Will this only be focused on the War of the Ancients? Or will the characters be sent into other times as well once they have dealt with matters there?
Not that I am complaining, I am anticipating epicness, but I quite like some of the other historic events in the Warcraft universe besides the War of the Ancients and knowing your writing it would make for an epic story either way.
Well, specifically
The Lure of Eternity
will be solely dealing with issues related to the War of the Ancients, because I have -a lot- to write over this single topic.
Paradox itself, if I feel I like this time traveling type of story, will include different stories that will probably go back to different time periods.
Well then I am anticipating the rest of the story and hopefully future stories revolving around further time travel in the wow universe :D
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FarseerLolotea
The prose might be a bit on the purple side; otherwise, I'm liking it so far.
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FarseerLolotea
o.O Care to elaborate?Take this sentence:
"Her skin was a deep blue that could be most attributed to the hue of the evening sky."
Descriptions like this are a bit over-the-top. You could have said "her skin was evening blue" or even "her skin was indigo." (And don't worry: I've seen
far
worse examples of purple prose.)
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